Posted by AnneM on October 13, 1997 at 17:14:45:
In response to Ending to JE--Did it seem off to you?, written by Rachel on October 12, 1997 at 22:01:02
] Did anybody else not quite love the ending? I liked it because Jane and Edward did get together, but I didn't like it because the rhythem seemed off. The pace and flow of it just didn't feel right to me. So, I ask you all your opinions and ideas as to why if seemed paced poorly.
I think I know what she was doing (compare/contrast and what happens to good/bad), but I think for me the ending was almost sad. Giving the last word to St John.
Too bad it did not end on the high note of babies and recovering eyesight.
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