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|Declaring himself or saying anything at all
Written by Laraine
(9/17/2006 10:05 a.m.)
in consequence of the missive, "Things are seldom what they seem, ..., penned by CarolB
I wouldn't expect him to declare himself in love with anyone by this early point in the novel, but to give him one speech in the first eight or more chapters, when he is introduced as a character and a love interest, in chapter 3, is not, in my humble opinion, the mark of a mature novelist.
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