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Written by gianni
(10/12/2011 10:32 p.m.)
in consequence of the missive, Where's the transition?, penned by Rachel G
... I find no such clear transition. Indeed, I don't even begin to doubt that we're still in Anne's consciousness until the second paragraph after you dismiss her altogether; the only reason I can't assign that one to her is the sudden insertion of Frederick's opinion of women he had met, which doesn't seem to fit into Anne's modest opinion of herself.
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