| Week 3 Haikus
Written by Cheryl
(10/6/2005 12:28 a.m.)
Captain Benwick seemed to draw the most inspiration this week along with some lovely ones on Anne's regained bloom. Tough choices this week!
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- Gentleness, a glow,
Some tenderness of the past,
She blushes - how sweet.
- Morose Benwick mourns
Poetry weighs down his soul
Through darkness Anne dawns
- "Wentworth, catch me, please!"
Says Louisa on the Cobb.
Crack! She hits her head.
- Mary Charles Sisters
Frederick confused in love
Anne so capable
- Town in offseason,
Sad men and women at meals,
All unescorted.
- A new friend at Lyme
Captain Benwick likes his poems
Anne offers more prose
- Poetry is fine,
enriches love, longing too.
Captain, read more prose.
- The brazen sea-breeze
Re-awakens Anne: blossom
Anew and shimmer!
- Lyme, the Cobb, the sea,
All must linger, gaze and sigh.
Anne regains her bloom.
- Fine winds restore bloom;
Anne seen anew? Jealousy
Stirs with stares on stairs!
- A heart aflutter,
Joy, thoughtless joy, and such haste;
On cold stones, bereft.
- It may be unsafe
to read so much poetry.
Try a bit more prose.
- A bird of sorrow
sat on the captain’s shoulder.
He fed it poems.
- Wallowing in grief
Selfish misery for you
You must try… like me.
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