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|Please Ditch Domino, Bernie Su
Written by Margaret C
(8/17/2013 11:32 p.m.)
in consequence of the missive, Interesting, penned by Ramya
It barely worked for exposition in LBD, when it had everything going for it. It didn't work in Sandition, and it means your main character has to become a Mary-Sue weblog developer. Emma doesn't tinker with technology (although Knightley might), she goes with her gut.
Emma isn't a second-generation wealth type person who puts up venture capital and involves herself in making a doubtful concept work, she is a third-generation wealth type person whose first priority in life is the comfort and security of her loving father, who has also never felt the need to do anything with money, except prevent it from going into high risk ventures, or even medium risk ventures. After the GFC, Mr Woodhouse might change - to keeping gold bars under his bed, not to letting his daughter explore the world of venture capital.
It is time for a better gimick. One that works for Emma. One that works.
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